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Saturday, March 7, 2009

First page of Bewitched & Betrayed

Whew! I meant to have posted this earlier this morning, but apparently I needed that ten hours of sleep. Need to get on the treadmill to wake myself up. I REALLY want to knock out four chapters of edits this weekend. I'll try to get there, but if I don't, I'll know I did my best -- it's the attempt/goal that counts.

As promised, here's the first page of my work-in-progress -- Bewitched & Betrayed. While The Trouble with Demons will be out on April 28, B&B won't be out until NEXT April. For those of you who can't stand the torment of waiting that long to read the rest of the story, avert your eyes now. ; ) The rest of you . . . enjoy!

I was being chased by a pissed off naked guy with a knife. A really big knife.

He being naked was expected since I was doing my ducking, weaving, and dodging down a hall in the Isle of Mid's finest bordello. You'd think that the worst that could happen to me was acute embarrassment and possible death. But this naked guy was possessed by the specter of a three-thousand-year-old, evil elven sorcerer who'd turned Mid's red-light district into his personal playground. I'd interrupted recess, and he was mad as hell.

My name is Raine Benares, and I'm a seeker. Tonight I'd found what I was looking for, as well as things I never wanted to see. The men who frequented The Satyr's Grove were here because they had money, not muscle tone. These weren't your finer specimens of manhood. And believe me, I got to see enough manhoods and fleeing pasty white posteriors to last me a lifetime.

Even worse, the sorcerer's specter had picked himself a young, fit, and fast body, not an old, flabby, and slow one. But on the upside, apparently slinging spells was a challenge when wearing someone else's skin. Hence the big knife and bad attitude.

There were screams, shouts, and chaos from the first and second floors. We now had the third floor hallway all to ourselves. Everyone had either fled downstairs, or barricaded themselves in the bedrooms that lined the hall. Unfortunately in The Satyr's Grove, the more expensive ladies were on the top floor, and our quarry had decided to splurge. I'd gotten separated from my Guardian bodyguards in the stampede of working girls and clients on the two floors below. I couldn't stop to wait for them. I'd been tracking this specter all week; I'd found him, and he was not getting away.

We'd had a plan, a good plan, but like most plans I'd been involved with lately, it'd gone straight down the crapper moments after implementation. I was upstairs, the specter was upstairs, but the man with the containment box to trap the specter was somewhere in the chaos downstairs.

Crap.

11 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Lisa!

Now I knew that I really shouldn't read this. Because now I'm sucked in. To a book that isn't even the next one, and isn't coming out for (probably) over a year.

But that really is okay, because I loved it and I'll get over being sucked into Bewitched and Betrayed soon enough - possibly next Saturday when you post the next snippet. The first page of B&B is really wonderful, Lisa. Good luck on your deadline!

About small, independant bookstores... I love going to them, but I only actually see them when I go somewhere out of my area. I can't find any near me. Do you think that this is because no one knows about them or because they aren't there? I was thinking that there might not be any, because I live in a relatively undeveloped area.

Thanks again Lisa! (and thanks for posting on your blog so early, for those of us who are morning people. not that I'm energetic at anyone in the morning - I'm nice to the people who are definately not morning people)

March 7, 2009 at 9:33 AM  
Blogger H said...

=D Interesting...

March 7, 2009 at 9:57 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

"And believe me, I got to see enough manhoods and fleeing pasty white posteriors to last me a lifetime."

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! What a great way to start off a novel.

March 7, 2009 at 10:10 AM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

Thank you, everyone!

March 7, 2009 at 10:23 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You gotta say, it's a great start!

March 7, 2009 at 10:59 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

it is good to know that a year from now ..Raine will still be getting into trouble and keeping us entertained..Thanks Lisa Loved it

March 7, 2009 at 11:37 AM  
Blogger Anne said...

{chuckle} Raine finds the most Interesting places to get into trouble. {AMUSED SMILE}

Anne Elizabeth Baldwin

March 7, 2009 at 4:30 PM  
Blogger Britt said...

:D
This makes me smile!

March 7, 2009 at 6:23 PM  
Blogger K.C. Shaw said...

Lots of fun! I'd be antsier to read it if I didn't have the third book to look forward to next month!

I like the name of that bordello. :)

March 8, 2009 at 1:07 PM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

I love the bordello name, too. An incredibly clever person came up with it for me. ; )

March 8, 2009 at 1:12 PM  
Blogger L. A. Green said...

Wow, what a hook. LOL Another year, huh? Good thing TTWD is coming out soon. :)

March 10, 2009 at 9:01 PM  

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