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Thursday, June 18, 2009

From story core to book synopsis

For me, coming up with a plot for a book and writing a synopsis isn't quite the same thing, but one leads to the other by necessity. (Editors like to see before they buy.) I'm highly organized and methodical -- my writing brain is the exact opposite (kinda like Felix and Oscar for you fans of classic TV). Books come to me in snippets of dialogue, pieces of scenes, chunks of chapters. I know there's a book in there somewhere, but it's up to me to lay all the puzzle pieces out then put them together to find out what the final picture looks like -- and to find the core of my book, that kernel of a thought of what it's REALLY about. Everything else you write (subplots, new characters, etc.) will branch out from that central thought.

Some writers swear by having a synposis to go by, some swear at it. I'm somewhere in between. If I have a complete synopsis for a book, I'll invariably stray from it, but it's nice to have it as a security blanket. When I wrote Bewitched & Betrayed, my intent was to flesh out the partial synopsis I'd written to sell the book to my publisher before I started writing it. Once I'd finished the edits for The Trouble with Demons, I didn't have time to flesh out anything. So I just dove in to writing Bewitched & Betrayed. My agent and my editor have the finished book now, and I'll be hearing in a few weeks how writing without a net worked for me. Hopefully it went well.

What a synopsis is not -- A synopsis is not every bit of action that will go into your book. It's the "view from 40,000 feet/big picture" view. You include only the main plot points. A book synopsis should ideally cover the book from beginning to end (but only the main points and how they relate to each other), introduce only your main characters, and be written in the tone of your book. My synopsis for TTWD was in first person, Raine's point of view (just like the books), and it is also in present tense. It gives the action a more immediate impact.

But when you're first starting to write a book synopsis, feel free to include anything and everything you want to. That way you've got something to work with (and to whittle down to find the core of your book -- what it's REALLY about). By having everything together in one document, you can see the big picture and begin to weed out the stuff you really don't need to include, and come up with other really cool stuff. Chances are it will start off looking like a convoluted mess (mine do). As you edit, delete, add, refine, tweak -- the synopsis will start to take shape (and most importantly, so will your plot).

And a reminder: tomorrow morning I have to go out of town on business and won't be back until late Saturday. I'll be back to blogging on Monday.

And on Tuesday night (June 23) at 7:00 at the Cary, NC, Barnes & Noble, I'll be doing a booksigning/panel discussion with James Maxey, Mark Van Name, and David Drake. If you're in the area, please come and join us. We had a blast last year. See my EVENTS page for all the details. I'll post pics from the signing on my blog next Wednesday.

Then on next Thursday morning, Derek and I leave for a long weekend (and much needed vacation) on North Carolina's Outer Banks. I'll post pics when I get back. And when I get back, it's back to work -- writing synopses for the next few Raine books to get another contract. I'll be blogging about the process.

And I'll post some of the best CafePress ideas to get your votes -- I've gotten some great ones.

Lisa

10 Comments:

Blogger Jo said...

A great post, Lisa! Really helpful! Thanks!

And how awesome that you'll be doing a signing on what has been declared Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers Day by Sharon Lee! That's so cool! :)

June 18, 2009 at 2:15 PM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

Thank you, Jo!

June 18, 2009 at 2:27 PM  
Anonymous Victoria Blake said...

Lisa-
I've always had a hard time with the dreaded synopsis. I think your advice may actually help me! Thanks for the post!

And I'm sure your editor will love B&B! How could they not?

I have a question for you, a kind of personal question. I know many of us pre published authors dream of getting a really big contract someday...one that will allow us to quit our day jobs and write full time. If we DO get published...what are the odds of that happening? Will you be able to quit your day job anytime soon? Would any of us be able to? Could you survive on just the money you make from your books alone? Because that is one of my goals as a pre published writer. I want to be able to get up every day and just write...not groan about working at a job I hate. I have just really wondered how many authors make it by just writing and if it is even feasible. And so far...I haven't really got any answers.

June 18, 2009 at 8:31 PM  
Blogger Vickie said...

Have fun on your vacation! It sounds lovely.

June 18, 2009 at 9:37 PM  
Blogger Alexia561 said...

Thanks so much for the post! I always wondered how writers actually wrote their books-with a detailed synopsis or just by the seat of their pants.

Have a great time on vacation! :)

June 18, 2009 at 9:59 PM  
Anonymous Chicory said...

Thanks for the post. I have a question about series writing. How much does over-arching theme interplay with the theme of an individual book? Are you ever looking for your central idea and realize that if you go for it, you won't be able to play with that idea in the next book where it's central to the plot? I don't know if that question made sense or not.

June 19, 2009 at 4:44 PM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

Hi Victoria,

The number of authors who make the really big bucks is VERY small. And when you sell a book, the "advance" isn't paid all at once, most are paid in thirds: a certain amount on signing the contract, on acceptance by your publisher of the finished manuscript, and on the finished book appearing on the bookstore shelves. When you figure in that most first novels sell for about $5,000 and each novel takes about a year to write, my advice would be to find a day job that you love. Yes, authors can get a six- and seven-figure advances, but those authors are few and far between. It's a great dream to have and keep having it, but at the same time be realistic about your financial needs.

June 20, 2009 at 4:43 PM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

Hi Chicory,

Well, first of all -- my books don't have themes. ; ) I have a story arc (where I'd like the main storyline to wrap up), and everything I do has to move the books forward to that resolution.

June 20, 2009 at 4:46 PM  
Anonymous Chicory said...

Thanks for answering my post. Guess theme is one of those things I shouldn't expect a quick solution to. It's not like cooking; three teaspoons of theme, mix well, bake for half an hour in pre-heated oven. :)

June 20, 2009 at 9:43 PM  
Blogger Rabid Fox said...

Ugh. The synopsis. A bane to many a writer, I'm sure. I will say, however, that writing out the synopsis did help me get a better handle on my story after the first draft.

Great post.

June 22, 2009 at 1:24 PM  

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