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Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Staying on track by keeping track

I finished Chapter 9 of Bewitched & Betrayed last night, and I've realized it's time to do what I've done on my past two books -- write a short synopsis of each chapter to remind me what I've written up to this point so I don't get off track.

I open a new Word document, go through each chapter and write no more than three short sentences telling what happened in that chapter. Just the big stuff; I don't get bogged down with little details (unless they're important). And once I've done this through Chapter 9, I can better see where I've been and where I need to go -- and what I need to go back and fix. When I'm writing a first draft, it's easy to forget the details of what I've already done. Say I started a sub-plot in Chapter 2, but never picked it back up again. This exercise reminds me of loose plotlines I might have forgotten about. Now, as I finish each new chapter, I'll write a quick summary to let me keep track of how the book is taking shape. Hey, it works for me. ; )

BTW -- Derek & I have been on NutriSystem for a week and a half. I've lost 7 pounds, Derek has lost almost 10 pounds. It ain't easy, but when you're seeing results, it's easier to hang in there. ; )

Some of what's coming in the few weeks:
  • How to keep a story believable
  • Need inspiration? Look into your characters' pasts and air that dirty laundry. ; )
  • Listen to your readers
  • Keep the action going
  • Real dialogue for realistic characters
  • Say no to "info dump"
  • Start with a hook, end with a cliffhanger
  • Let every scene advance the plot
  • Never stop learning
Lisa

10 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

That is an excellent idea...I really like that!

November 12, 2008 at 10:45 AM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

It REALLY helps me out.

November 12, 2008 at 11:03 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hmm ill give it a try but i ususally remember whats going on, good memory except when it comes to characters then im hopeless. :)

November 12, 2008 at 2:59 PM  
Blogger Cherity said...

It's also a useful organization tool. I write one-word summaries of paragraphs to make sure that they fit where they're supposed to.

November 12, 2008 at 3:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

lists of people their discriptions and all their "Stuff" aka what there doing walking around in my book help a bunch but that is a good idea, sometimes i get really off track...

November 12, 2008 at 3:06 PM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

I'm not exactly known for simple plots, so this little exercise is invaluable for me.

November 12, 2008 at 3:17 PM  
Blogger Stacey said...

Love this idea! I'm going to borrow it...if I can ever get this second book off the ground. Ugh. :)

November 12, 2008 at 6:25 PM  
Blogger Lisa Shearin said...

I remembered to stop and use it because my book is losing altitude. ; ) I need to find out where I've been, what I've done, and what I should do next. It's time to spend a day or two plotting.

November 12, 2008 at 6:54 PM  
Blogger Tia Nevitt said...

I had to go back and write down everything one of my characters did in order to detangle a plot knot. It was very helpful and made me think of a few more great tweaks. Next time, I think I'll try the running outline.

November 12, 2008 at 7:16 PM  
Blogger Nayuleska said...

Something I'm definitely going to try out. Editing one wip at the moment, discovered name changes for a main character (not sure how that happened), critiquers are picking up on plot points which got created when I wrote the chapter, but need to be linked and explained earlier/later on.

I have a terrible memory, so the chapter summaries will help me with plot continuity!

November 13, 2008 at 4:46 AM  

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